高考英語作文在評分的時候,主要從內容要點、運動詞匯和語法結構的數量、詞匯的準確運動和句子的結構把握、上下文的連貫性等四個方面進行考慮。2020年江蘇新東方在線高考英語作文。
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假定你是李華,在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上,你看到以下內容。 請你根據博客內容,寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陳述自己的理由 3.提出至少2條建議。
范文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
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假定你是李華,正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定,你需要書面預約,請按下列的要求寫一封信:1.本人簡介 2.求助內容 3.約定時間 4.你的聯系方式(Email: lihua@1236.com ; Phone:12345678)
范文: Dear Sir ,
I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :lihua@1236.com ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
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假設你是某中學新老師李紅,請給你的朋友張華寫封信,告訴他你第一天上課的情景,主要內容如下:1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介紹你處理該事的方式 3.談談你的感想
范文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
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假設你晨光高中的李華。你校擬選拔一些優秀學生,利用暑假到晨曦希望
小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據提示寫給校評選組一封申請信:1.對此活動的認識(如對本人,學生和社會的益處)2.個人優勢(如性格,獨立生活能力,語言能力等) 3.你的計劃(如怎樣輔導等)
范文: Dear Sir/Madam ,
I’m lihua from class one ,senior two . I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need . Besides ,I ‘ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on .
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
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假設你是李華,美國一所學校準備與你校共同辦一份中學生英文報紙,該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你寫回信1. 表示贊成2。提出你喜歡的欄目3。簡要說明理由
范文:
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited that we are going to start a magazine together . It in indeed wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success .
I would like the magazine to have three columns : news , Teachers’ advice and students’ voice . From the news column we can learn about what is gong in both of our schools . In teachers’ advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom . Students’ voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies .
I believe this magazine will surely strengthen our ties ,and I am looking forward to reading it .
Yours faithfully ,
Li hua
2020年江蘇新東方在線
高考英語作文。
高考英語作文的評分標準是能否準確運動語法、詞匯、拼寫、標點等。在使用一些句型、短句的時候,能不能夠清楚表達自己的意思,從而寫出流暢易懂得作文。